Some parents do not agree with the way teachers are teaching their children. Do you think that parents should express their disapproval to the teachers?

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Some parents do not agree with the way teachers are teaching their children. Do you think that parents should express their disapproval to the teachers?

People never devote too much to the education. As we all know, parents tend to be picky when it comes to the education of their children and some is them even have their own thoughts and opinions which are different from teachers. According to my perspective, it is necessary and helpful for parents to express their ideas and disapprovals to teachers in time.

First of all, parents better know their kids than teachers do under the system of the one-to-all education system. They spend the most of time companying with their children since a young age and always consider kids as the priority. There is no one understand children more than their parents. In contrast, teachers may master in professional knowledge and educational theories, but they have no time and no energy to contact every child individually. Some teacher probably even cannot remember all the students in the classrooms, let alone choose suitable methods for everyone. In this case, teachers can learn children form parents’ thoughts and make some changes in order to conduct better education.

In addition, today’s parents have the quality to educate and guide children because they are well-educated. There are some parents learn a lot of theories and knowledge about education on their own only to endure they do not mislead their children. Motivating by the love from their kids, they keep learning the latest information. Thus, it is not uncommon that some parents are more professional than teachers and their point of views are actually correct. Teachers ought to be moderate and take parents opinions seriously.

Furthermore, the relationship between parents and teachers as well as schools will be strengthened if parents can express their disapproval. Communicating with teachers frequently is the most effective way to avoid conflicts and solve problems. If there is no channel for parents to speak out their disapprovals for teachers, their rage will definitely break out in some day. The relationship between my aunt and my cousin’s teacher is a classic example. My aunt did not agree on some teaching methods with my cousin’s first English teacher but just tolerate him. Time and time again, she thought even his managers were unacceptable and then wrote a letter to the headmaster together with others parents in the class. Finally, my cousin’s class changed a new English in the end. This thing can truly reveal the harm of lack communication between teachers and parents.

In conclusion, the disapprovals from parents with ration and knowledge are of great importance for teachers to improve their teaching. With the joint effort of parents, the teacher can eventually educate students effectively and efficiently.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e students effectively and efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27917620137 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89133853221 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508009153318 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.861979889 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48764020127 0.236089414692 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139346481214 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859108305833 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295310483214 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308686436156 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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