Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
In this world of technology, it's important to have smartphones but they are having their own disadvantage also. Therefore, I am not in favor of young children owning smart phone rather allow them to use our cell phone for a while.
Smart phones really made our life smoother than earlier, Today everything is available online. If we want to but anything we can order it easily and it will deliver to home without any physical efforts like it allows us to skip the steps to go market, search for the material we want to purchase, to compare with other brands, etc.
But at the same time, the ratio of cybercrime is increasing day by day. It is very easy for hackers to hack our systems with fishing and children are not capable to identify the fishing patterns they met get attacked virtually. All data on the phone will be compromised, which is very dangerous.
Nowadays smartphones become addictive to children. They play games for hours and hours which directly affects their vision and mental health. Children prefer to play games on phone over playing games on the ground. Their physical activity is reduced and hence they fall sick many times hence they show poor performance in school.
Smartphone helps us to stay updated with the outer world, it helps children to do the projects more efficiently as it reduces the time to search for any data. It can help our children to learn many things like there are many educational videos available on YouTube and some on some educational sites are also useful. But parents have to make sure their child should use the phone for learning purpose only.
Therefore, in my opinion, parents should forbid young children from owning smart phones rather they should allow their children to use their phones as it is an important tool to grow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... they are having their own disadvantage also. Therefore, I am not in favor of young ...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hase, to compare with other brands, etc. But at the same time, the ratio of cyber...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40922610966 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2972841262 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305041011699 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949037980468 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800604209575 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161400727498 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821327720283 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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