Some people believe that parents should pay their children a small amount of money to do jobs around the home (such as washing the dishes or taking out the garbage), while other people believe that parents should not pay their children to do these tasks. Which view do you agree with, and why?
Needless to say, doing different tasks like Housework play a vital role in the life of individuals. In this regard, while some people are of the opinion that parents should not pay a wage to their kids for doing house work, other individuals believe that paying money to children for doing house work help them have a successful person. I, personally speaking, agree with the second group for a couple of reasons, which are described in the following paragraphs.
First of all, paying wages helps kids improve their performance. In fact, paying money helps them experience financial independence, which in turn increases self-esteem and satisfaction. For example, when I was a high school student, getting money from parents for housekeeping like cooking helped me prepare for independent living, this feeling made me more confidence among other friends. Ultimately, having confidence and a sense of independence helped me increase my performance on a variety of topics.
Second, paying children helps them gain good knowledge and experience that is important to them in the future. In fact, they learn teamwork, collaboration, and hard work. it is obvious that having teamwork ensures we gain a proper job in the future life. For example, when I was a little girl, my parents used to pay me to cook, so I decided to improve my performance and cook with more focus. After a while, my good background helped me get a good job at a big hotel. So, earning money for kids helps their children guarantee a job in future life.
In conclusion, paying a wage to children for doing tasks such as cooking, washing and washing the dishes help kids increase their performance, and they are gaining good experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...teamwork, collaboration, and hard work. it is obvious that having teamwork ensures...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00701754386 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79451161525 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3262871743 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262609944333 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874528684886 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101761265871 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184698114664 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080188312769 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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