some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of the time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believes that it is the best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork.
World is Changing; so does people. Soon the story tellers will begin with the term "once upon a time, there were parents who had free time for their children". No one can blame parents for not having enough time; for the novel situation requires more and more effort to build a convinent life for their families. However, there's a constant fact in which family: the commonplce care of children. Some people consider it as supports regarding materials, as a big house or fancy clothes. Nevertheless, many others are of the opinion that to involve is the key. Parents usually have two major options for having a portion in their children's life: some prefer to merge their involvement with urgent activities as doing homeworks, while many choose to be a playmeate. I am an apponent of latter choice; I do assume that it surpasses other chioces in various ways:
First and for the most, to be a playmate not only establish a healthy lifestyle for children, but also reform the parents'. For example, nowadays many children suffer from obseity caused by adverse nutrition and lack of exercise. It's a terrific opportunity to amend it by doing sport. Meanwhile, parents can benefit from the healthy lifestyle the have.
Furthurmore, it's given that the image of parents depicted in each child is hard to refine after certain ages. By playing with children, parents apear to be cool ones whom can be enjoyed spending time with. Thus, children will consider their parents as friend not an outlandish adult.
Last but not for the least, there will be a vigorous joint between parents and children which has utter value. This bond will reinforce the trust each party has, the most effect of which re pointed to children themselves. Suppose a child in a very sensitive criteria of his life. As long as one has some other trustworthy to whom he or she can talk with freely, no malicious can harm them. Thus, it's like an insurance for paycological health of kids.
To summarize a long story, albeit there are several ways of spending time with children, the best is to emerge as a playmate. In this way not only a healthy life style will approve, but also the mental image will be refined. The strengthen of parenthood communication is another important factor which makes any parent to have a second thought about their method of relating.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, then, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83291770574 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57988215653 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57855361596 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1737005695 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254795921946 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676978036066 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639629472454 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13989688867 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069292595749 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.