Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, people are more under pressure due to payments of bills, loans, etc. So, they should work hard and in many cases, both men and women should work in order to cover expenses and save money for children's future. As the result, they don't have time for cooking and have to eat meal at food stands or restaurant. In addition, some of them weren't trained to be a good cooker, then, they decide to ignore cooking and have dinner or lunch in public places. On the contrary, I am the one of people who are really avid to learn cooking, and even I cook many delicious meals for my family. But, why cooking in home is very important to me? Just read following paragraphs to know.
First of all, cooking at home by myself is very good for my family's health. I use high quality materials which are very important in individuals' digestion. I try to cook a wide variety of foods which belongs to different cultures because most of these recipes consist of ingredients that can avoid some dangerous diseases like cancer, diabetes, etc. In similar vein, researches indicated that healthy foods, which cook at homes, are very effective in family members' psychological well-being. For instance, Indian people use a lot of spices in their foods such as peppers, cardamon and other spices, hence, they rarely get cancer or even a simple cold as well as mental disorders. So, the more healthy food, the more physical health and the less psychological disorders.
Second of all, cooking at home make me feel that I can do everything. It increases my self-confidence significantly. When I cook for my family members, I get a lot of compliments. Therefore, it makes me passionate and intrepid to learn many new skills. For instance, before start to cook, I was a person who just asked others to help him to fix faucets, car, etc. Now, thanks cooking, I start to paint my room, repair my broken faucets and my car whenever needed. Hence I can save a lot of money too. Thus, if I neglect cooking and ate foods like many people in restaurants, I was an unskilled person.
Third of all, I feel relax while I am cooking. I am very under pressure because of job stress and only way that I help me to get rid of it is cooking. Enjoying from mixing material together helps me to set my mind free of everything and just concentrate on my cooking. Furthermore, thanks cooking, my family gather to our house everyday to eat my cooks and we have a lot of fun altogether. So, cooking makes my family member's relationship stronger than past and makes me more relax.
In conclusion, cooking in home is a very effective way to keep your psychological and physical health as well as improvement of your self-confidence. My recommendation is that cooking a the best way to keep your family members together. What I discover from cooking is that cooking is equal to long healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in many cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6449704142 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71318963978 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508875739645 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1838225623 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2068965517 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4827586207 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.37931034483 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133564379659 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037624574803 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430728387118 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792625595836 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04892805207 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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