Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and starts the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Many people think that getting up late in the morning is better for them. They say that this guarantees them enough amount of sleeping and make them more ready for their day. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that getting up early in the morning is the best because it gives the day its real value, in same time people are more energetic at that time of the day.
First, we feel the real value of the day when we wake up early in the morning. We feel that we still have at least sixteen hours that can fit most of our needs. We see the sunrise and the beginning of the day, so we are ready to do our stuff from working, studying, playing, entertaining and finally resting by the end of the day. On the other hand, waking up late does not give the same value of the day’s hours. For example, I woke up one day late in the morning about nine o’clock. I had a different feeling than every day’s feeling. I felt that I missed the precious hours of the day; I felt the day is too short after that to accomplish anything. That was a horrible feeling. From that moment after, I decide I will never wake up late again. Each moment of my day is really important and has its own value.
Second, people are more energetic early in the morning than any time after. They wake up ready to work and achieve. I believe it is something related to the sunshine. I think sun rays and light give us the hope of the new beginning, which in consequence gives us the energy to go through all our daily works. I have friends who stay awake until late at night, as a result, they woke up late. They are always lazy, don’t start their daily activities until noon, prefer to stay at home and usually asks for help. While on contrary, I am, personally, get up early, starts my routine then go and take care of my work. I accomplish a lot on my to-do list and work. When I compare myself to them, I feel the difference and appreciate more getting up early.
In conclusion, I encourage every person who favors getting up late, to try –just for one week- to get up early. If you did so, you will never regret it. You will discover for yourself the difference between being lazy and being ready to do a lot of work, and between the short day and a day full of blessed time and achievement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ergy to go through all our daily works. I have friends who stay awake until late ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... full of blessed time and achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, really, second, so, still, then, while, at least, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28054298643 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3080604799 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490950226244 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3359073808 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7692307692 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57692307692 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381841858184 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973573256154 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634560520553 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227249767988 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316664631931 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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