Some people prefer to live in small town Others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live in Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
There is no shortage of opinion on which place is best for the people to live a small town and big city both have their own benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, I will prefer to live in a small town. I feel this for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
First of all, In the small town have large farms and no companies, and all so the air of small towns is fresh good for health. My personal experience is a great example of this, I used to live in a small town at that time my health was good after we back to the city I felt sick and I lose my weight. As a result that the city life is very anxious and suck rather than town life. for this reason, small towns are the best place to live.
Secondly, In small-town people are very co-operative and behave like family In contrast if we saw city life people are very less cooperative. They never easily help each other. Drawing from my own experience whenever we went to our village for Diwali(Indian festival). All our neighbors and we enjoyed together. we never felt that they are our neighbors. Moreover, when we planing for coming back to the city all people give us a gift and food for bringing. For this reason, I really love village life it's really fun.
In conclusion, whenever I have a choice in the city and town I would like to choose the town. This is because, In town, all people are very kind and loveable, moreover, the environment and greeneries are awesome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34432234432 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37088318852 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498168498168 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7242537531 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.125 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26684102506 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969224510901 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102382815797 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179406331177 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102081730022 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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