Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.
Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.
What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.
No one can deny that computer has both positive and negative effect on our life. If I were forced to choose I would definitely raise my voice for that computer has very big Positive effect on human society. It is my firm belief that co0mputer made our life more convenient and easier due to several reasons. I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, computer performs any calculation faster than human and save time. Computer easily completes any type of complex calculation. Different types of data of various important scientific researches are stored and calculated by computer easily. The different complex calculations, which take a lot of time when done by human being, computer, completed this calculation with a very minimum range of time. I admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal example. I remember when I read in university I worked with a scientific group to make my research work. This group worked for making atom bomb. I found that in that project work large types of calculation are done by the computer. I also helped them by doing calculation with the computer. If the computer had not invented it would have very tough for me to complete my project works do quickly.
Secondly, why I illustrate my specific thought is that computer is now used in various professional institutions for performing different calculation. Because it saves time and solves any calculetical problem more easily. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. My one of the friends told me his job life few years ago. He worked in a multinational band. He said that fifteen years ago, some complex calculation for maintaining the balance of the bank done by his twelve colleagues working for ten hours, but now these complex calculation is only done by one computer within thirty minutes. It likes very astonishing to me. If the computer had not invented, these type of calculation never would be completed with such a shorter period.
However, some might argue that computer damage our brain’s calculation capability. But it is not right for all the time because computer helped the human to think for new innovation and more complex calculation. So computer ultimately helps people to do more innovative things.
To sum up, in light of above reasons I strongly believe that computer have made our life easier and convenient. Because of its speedy work and capacity to solve the complex calculation can make it possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93062200957 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75158828077 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483253588517 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 418.0 20.1344086022 2076% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2061.0 100.406767564 2053% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 418.0 20.6045352989 2029% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 70.0 5.45110844103 1284% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221431591292 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221431591292 0.076458572812 290% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155895443763 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450763885143 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 210.8 11.7677419355 1791% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -352.79 58.1214874552 -607% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 166.3 10.1575268817 1637% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.5 8.01818996416 343% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.002688172 550% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 169.2 10.0537634409 1683% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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