Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The Internet is undeniably a crucial element in human life. A controversial argument that is often raised regarding this topic is whether this vast availability to utilize information can cause a problem or not. If I were obliged to take one side, I would think that it provides a lot of valuable information for several reasons, on a few of which I will elaborate subsequently.
The first reason corroborating my view is that most of the information like new research or news is on the internet. It is really beneficial due to the fact that we could have access to all the information we need by just a click. Also, by publishing this information on the net we can help to save the forests as there is no need to cut them to use the paper. My own experience is a compelling example of this issue. I am a researcher at Amirkabir University of Technology in the field of Biomedical Engineering. My work is all related to the discovery of new ways of drug delivery which is a new topic in the world. If I do not have the access to new publications in different journals it takes me a lot of time to search for them on the paper or since my country is far from America where is most of the well-known journals are, it takes a lot of time to post it. Besides, I have to pay for the delivery. Thus, It is really useful to have access to lots of information whenever we want.
The second rationale why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that as we live a chaotic life, we may do not have enough time to go shopping every day's need like groceries. It is more time consuming if we just buy them on the internet and continue our work. It takes us a few seconds to search for anything we want to purchase on it. My personal experience can shed light on this issue. As I mentioned before, I am a researcher and work in the lab which actually takes all my time and energy. Ordering what I need for my home on the internet makes life easier for me.
To make the long story short, the internet is definitely beneficial as it helps us to not only always be aware of new information but also save time and energy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26368159204 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67733927444 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480099502488 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2608342713 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2105263158 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126306810743 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416089300634 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398645892884 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794303258552 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384635567429 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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