Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays. internet is the most common tools for gaining information in different part of the world. you can reach thousand pags of information By searching a key word of a particulare subject in the search engines. However, I think this gigantic amount of information can cause a lot of problems because of two reasons.
First, there are a excessive amount of information. When you search a subject in the Internet, you can see thounsands of pages that is propsed by the search engins. This amount of information can baffle people. Also, a huge amount of this information can not be trusted, because writers of this pages aren't expert and their main porpuse is to attract viewer to gain more income yielded from adevertisments. For example, recently, I had a backache and I wanted to find out the main reason of that. So, before going to doctor, I just searched 'backache' in Google. Then, Google proposed millions of pages about that and I was so confused. In several pages, I saw that they explained different causes for that symptom such as: leg problems, shoulders problems and even eye problems. When doctor examinated me, he told me that is just a contraction in my back. So, Internet information is excessive and can't be trusted.
Second, Internet information can created a illusion about different subjects. The Internet information can decieve people by giving a concise information. Most of people by reading a few page think that they are expert in that particulare subject, while it probably needs a lot of books to become expert. And they venture their money or life based of that little information. For example, a friend of mine wanted to invest in stocks. Initially, he searched different aspect of stock market and then he begane to buy and sell stocks based of his limited information. After a while he lost a lot of money, because he didn't have enough knowledge about stock marketing. So, the Internet information can cause illusion of knowledge.
In sum, In my view, information of internet can cause a lot problems because of excessive information and knowledge illusion, although by becoming expert in colecting information can solve these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Internet
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Suggestion: a thousand
...ferent part of the world. you can reach thousand pags of information By searching a key ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cause of two reasons. First, there are a excessive amount of information. When y...
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Suggestion: amounts
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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... can not be trusted, because writers of this pages arent expert and their main porpu...
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Suggestion: aren't
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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...hile he lost a lot of money, because he didnt have enough knowledge about stock marke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, for example, i think, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96978021978 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83725511794 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9656070413 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2272727273 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182513564837 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598118305226 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581856695233 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138390612829 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362981018386 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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