Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems.
In todays changing world use of technology is very common in human beings. We can access all kind of information from various web browers to leracn some thing new or to explore on a certain topic. By sometimes this information can be wrong or indalid to the real topic. So I am with the stand that access to much information creates problems.
First of all the main reason is using of information for wrong assumptions. For eg. one of my friend has habbit of searching information on internet. So once when he was not feeling well and has some kind of simptums. So he started searching for the solution of his illness on internet, insted of consulting a doctor. And he also took worng medicens sugesseted by the internet. After cuople of days his health got more bad. Then he consulted the doctor and he had got allergy of the mecidens. Because they were wrong and the information form the web didnt mathch his simptum. Because of this worng information insted of getting well he suffer more.
Secondly, the information shown on the web is not always right. Because the information is uploaded by a random usere. Once this information reduced my marks in a assignments. I had to submit a research done on a topic in the form of asssignment work. And I collected all the information form the internet. And instead of cross checking the information with other mateiral like book , I directly submited it, because i trusted the information. The proffessor scolded me to present wrong information. After discussing with the proffesor, he explained me that the web is not always correct, you should always search for a solid information wich can be trusted.
To conclude, dont blindly trunt on all the information avaible on internet, alway cross check it with proofs. Wrong information is harmfull to humans. This is because I have personally suffered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tion from various web browers to leracn some thing new or to explore on a certain topic. B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so, then, well, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82075471698 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82704399503 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525157232704 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.229883125 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.875 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251834246225 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766644187233 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068607550868 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169687630865 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380880122421 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.