Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
The Internet has created a revolution in today’s modern technological era. Our life and all the essential services will pause if internet goes down for a day. We need internet in every step in our life, such as booking a cab, train or flight for travel, banking for our financial needs, connectivity in our office or to connect a distant relative. This has become a very necessary part of our daily routine.
According to me, internet provides people with a lot of information and we really need those to survive in this era. Internet has evolved so much in a few decades that we can fulfill any of our necessity from internet. For example, earlier, if we become ill in night time or in a very odd time when no doctor is available, it becomes a cause of anxiety and tension for everyone. Now, many online medications and online help websites such as 1mg have come into play. We can easily search for medication of common symptoms and somehow stabilize the patient. Then, we can run him into hospital. Earlier, many people died due to lack of this quick primary medication.
Internet can also help us in some other ways also like if we want to travel to a new place, we can search for many useful information such as tourist attraction, things to do etc. We may also find a good host or a cheaper accommodation on websites like Airbnb.
There are also many other uses of internet like finding a good novel or a movie which can make our day. In today’s busy life we can get everything from grocery, daily needs to electronics or anything of our choice in a very competitive rate from online shopping websites.
But there are some risks involved using internet. Many web pages host wrong information or fake news which can mislead people. In recent times, personal information of users has been breached and used in a wrong way. Sometimes, fake news, edited photos or videos can promote hatred, aggressiveness among the general public.
We can say that internet is very much necessary. It has changed our lifestyle and internet has a multidimensional application. But we should not believe everything on internet blindly. If we carefully observe, we can easily distinguish between a fake information and a real one. Therefore, we can conclude that internet is created for good and it is also improving the society and lifestyle. But, we have to use it wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...necessary part of our daily routine. According to me, internet provides people with a lot of...
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much useful information', 'a good deal of useful information'.
Suggestion: much useful information; a good deal of useful information
...ravel to a new place, we can search for many useful information such as tourist attraction, things to d...
Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ion of users has been breached and used in a wrong way. Sometimes, fake news, edited photos or...
Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'public'.
...romote hatred, aggressiveness among the general public. We can say that internet is very mu...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77239709443 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75620316718 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532687651332 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7402635353 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.84 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.52 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1422797694 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047585704288 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562738967969 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743311181132 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297710334655 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.