Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Unfortunately, our world is not a equal place to everyone. People sometimes do not realise how much they have until they find a beggar in the streets with pretty much nothing apart from his clothes. Give money to beggars can be risky, however the quality of life improvement that you will give form most of them is unbelieveble.
Firstly, most of beggars have not much to eat. Live in the streets makes difficult for them to storage proper food, fruits and certain drinks, such as: milk and juices. It also makes almost impossible for them to cook their own food as they do not have a proper kitchen appliances and facilities to do so. Hence, the only choice for the beggars is to buy a certain amount of food for each day, in that way they can have a proper meal without waste it.
Secondly, the weather can be very harsh with people on the streets. Usually the temperature drops a lot at night time, which is a life risk for them. Also, certain places at the street can be are really violent and sleep in a open place without security can be extremely dangerous. With money, beggars are able to find a shelter with a reasonable price and sleep safe rather than sleep in the streets.
Thirdly, as I mentioned before beggars do not have access to certain facilities, such as: kitchen, bathroom, bedroom, among others. When beggars live out in the streets they are often dirties due to weather and life style conditions. Money can allow them to buy new and more comfortable clothes or even have access to public laundries where they can wash their own clothes.
In conclusion, give money to beggars can be a risk if they are addicted to drugs and/or alcohol, however a small amount of money for us can create a big impact on beggars life, improving their life style, their health and their overall self esteem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the beggars') or simply say ''most beggars''.
Suggestion: most of the beggars; most beggars
...t of them is unbelieveble. Firstly, most of beggars have not much to eat. Live in the stree...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...where they can wash their own clothes. In conclusion, give money to beggars can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60615384615 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36135353824 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532307692308 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4166636744 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183625900454 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642439116513 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385535952914 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11297610828 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305173541479 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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