Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of giving money to beggars. In my point if view, giving money to beggars is a correct. It is my firm that giving money for beggars is a correct thing to do for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, you never know what the beggar will do with your money, but, if you see that he or she is asking money to buy something essential, like food, I wouldn’t think twice and give the money to him or his. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience, when I was in Brazil, I was leaving a restaurant, when a beggar stopped me, and asked me some money to buy food, I give him the money, and when I looked back, he was drinking bear. After this, I think twice before give money to a strange person. In contrast, all the other times that some bagger asked me some money, I always got into the supermarket with that person, to see what he or she needs to buy, and if this think was essential, I bought it.
Secondly, you never know that person is there, what he or she passed, and what that person is feeling, so giving money, would definitely help. Let me use the example above, that beggars that I helped, immediately when I bought what they really need, I could see the smile in their faces, and that, was the most valuable thing that a person could receive
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, i think, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27838827839 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28152499532 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5852415023 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.777777778 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339715620489 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171606079082 0.076458572812 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992502753584 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228645215082 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109710782339 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.14 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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