Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with?Give reasons for your choice.
There is a believe which parents should control and manage their children’s free time. I personally have a similar notion, because parents can cultivate better and more successful children by limiting what they do or what they do not even in their spare time. Here is some points to provide this concept such as you can control your children to avoid fallacious habits, thrive their skills in the field which they are good at and learn them to have a schedule to be a well-organized people.
Children could hurt in inappropriate activities on their free time. Since parents do not control their side hobbies of their children, young boys and girls may acquaint with new people and make wrong friends. Friendships which can lead to visiting hookah bars and starting new dangerous habits instead of playing football in neighborhood. These habits can affect children’s future as decrease their vitality, so chances of addiction get higher for these young bodies.To conclude, uncontrollable leisure time might end up with bad consequences for children.
A suitable activity can thrive a fabulous skill. In this world with loads of video games and smart phones few children like to try a musical instrument or start a new sport. There is a possibility that a child have a great potential to become a brilliant pianist, but he never touches a real piano, since he played call of duty mostly in his teenage days. For example we would never watch a Messi’s football match if his father did not bring him to a football court on one Saturday’s evening. To sum up, parents can help their children to be a profession in any field by registering them in smart evening classes.
Parents can teach their children to have a schedule in ordinary life by organizing their free times. A child learns to be present in several events in a week regularly. He should be on time in these occasions and learn to be punctual. Hence, he knows to have a schedule for all days week to attain the most of every each one.
Parents would help their children if they manage and show them a firm way to fill their free times. Seldom do people think that a child needs someone to impose him what to do in his spare time. He should be free to live, and decides on his own life. However this idea can not protect children from dangers in the route, since they need a person to opt and control their spare times. All in all, not only do parents shelter their kids, but children also success in individual life by comprehensive and wise choices make for children’s leisure time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76286353468 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68154938894 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521252796421 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7050069759 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.380952381 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394891648713 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125369735238 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988301776534 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23486303262 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929188110637 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.