Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. What do you think?
First off, ample time is needed to have good memorable events with our friends. In fact, in this time we talking with each other about hot topics that happened in the day or week. To illustrate this I will use of personal example, I live in dormitory and I have two roommates that we become good friends, because we usually talk about daily events happened for us. We think about the best way for solving them. In addition, sometimes for having a fine time we intend to go a trip or cinema. We talk about our problems in university facilities is as the same, so we will know about the important news in the University. Therefore, we have a strong connection with each other every day, but if we do not spend this ample time, we surely are not friends such now.
However, on the flip side of the coin, if someone has not respectful attitude for acknowledgment us, it is better keep away, because almost of people know value of something when loose it. For instance, I knew one, and we was friends with each other after time passed, but after that I saw that she says in a bad way. In fact, she has not enough polite, so I preferred to become away. I kept my value front of others, because she said everything that she liked without thinking. By doing so, she contact me in an excellent manner. Therefore, our relationship improved, and we stay good friends. However, if this story continued for a while time, I cannot endure her, and our relationships became divorce.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...n the flip side of the coin, if someone have not respectful attitude for acknowledgm...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...sed time, but after that I saw when she saying in the friendly manner, she has not eno...
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Line 2, column 716, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and our relationships became divorce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54307116105 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48481480018 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7870598065 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306896829733 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112881487549 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622403293614 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231581206649 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290647209587 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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