Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate them more often. What do you think?
Nowadays, having a good relationship is a vital part of the life because relationships impact on people's lives, actually, being in the friendship have positive effects on personal life. Some people think that it is necessary to keep away from others because it shows the importance of the relationship, but, on the other hand, some people and too me believe that staying in the relationship helps people to have a better social life. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, remaining in the relationship causes people to receive a lot of information about each other. Having exhaustive knowledge about others causes people to familiarize with ethic details each other, and then based on this knowing people can improve their relationship because people have gained essential data and they know that what the opposite side likes and what do not like. Consequently, this information causes people to control their behavior in their relationship to have a perfect relationship.
Secondly, staying in the relationship acts like glue, this can hold parts together. I want to say that people must stay in the relationship, especially, when a relationship is in difficult conditions. Better to say that, people should try to maintain their relationship in any situation because this behavior shows loyalty that is the most important part of the relationship. So, by doing this work people can make an extended relationship.
To sum up, taking all the reasons into account, I believe that people have to keep their relationships because, in this way, they can attain information about each other, and also staying in the relationship in various situations prove the value of the relationship.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, then, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25539568345 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02041772676 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7484964256 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.818181818 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408732420357 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169768975256 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105393391899 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265323775731 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729230773819 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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