Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better?
In the modern life universities offer to people to study numerous objects. People have opportunity to work in many different subjects at the same time. They can improve their ability in various fields, and people can have more success in their life by studying different of subjects. The educational system where I have been a student for the last 16 years is a modern school, I can only imagine the benefits of studying in various subjects.
The first point I would like to make is that there are compelling advantages to taking classes in many subjects during your study. One benefit of them is that you will have many opportunities to get a job after you graduated from university. When a company looks for an employee to work, they hire people who have a broad knowledge in many academic subjects than to specialize. The reason is that if you have experiences in various subjects, your brain works in an effective manner. Moreover, you can solve a problem easily, when you face a challenge in your life. For instance, I am an industrial engineering, and when I was in university, I had to take many different academic courses because of my study field. Also I got a entrepreneurship class to have qualifications for getting a job. After I graduated from university, I looked for a job in my country. I have an interview with human resources in a well-respected company. They hired me in a management position, and also they offer me a good salary. Something else that is good is that you will have knowledge in different areas. It means that when a company thinks of choosing to give a higher position between two candidate, it would be a candidate who have different point of view in business company. On the other hand, If you are an expert in one field, you will not have knowledge in another fields. Therefore, you will limit yourself by studying only one area.
Most important than advantages to getting job easily, and to gain different point of view is that you will have network from different areas. When you get a different academic class, you will have a lot of friends. It will provide you to know people from different fields and if you have a question one of these areas that you took class, you can ask people that you met in same course which you took.
In conclusion, I have taken this kind of subjects, and I have been a successful person in this way. The reason is that it is a good match with my personality. I can imagine that, for some people, choosing one subject might be a good thing in university. For example, you could be an expert your own field, if you study for one subject. However, for me it is better to take different kind of subjects in university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...cts. People have opportunity to work in many different subjects at the same time. They can imp...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad knowledge
...oyee to work, they hire people who have a broad knowledge in many academic subjects than to speci...
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Line 4, column 460, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s in various subjects, your brain works in an effective manner. Moreover, you can solve a problem easi...
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Line 4, column 656, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...when I was in university, I had to take many different academic courses because of my study fi...
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Line 4, column 715, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...emic courses because of my study field. Also I got a entrepreneurship class to have ...
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Line 4, column 726, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s because of my study field. Also I got a entrepreneurship class to have qualific...
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Line 4, column 1176, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'candidate' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'candidates'.
Suggestion: candidates
...g to give a higher position between two candidate, it would be a candidate who have diffe...
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Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'networked'.
Suggestion: networked
...ent point of view is that you will have network from different areas. When you get a di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60165975104 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72606844797 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429460580913 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7434977742 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3076923077 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122168741386 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408622505331 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367689676034 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832206009563 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030339002396 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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