Sometimes it is better to be dishonest with people than to always tell them the truth.
It is undeniable that building a good and a new relationship with others or even keeping an old one is a very hard thing. It needs a huge effort from both parts. Personally, I believe that one of the most critical thing in any relation is to be honest and to always tell the truth no matter what the circumstances are. I feel this way for several reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, dealing with others is based on trust, and it is impossible to trust a liar. Therefore, if anyone wants to be able to deal with people regarding their differences, he needs to be honest and gain their trust. For example, last year, I met a new friend called Noor. From the beginning, she told be that she wanted to be my friend because she had no one to hangout with. It was obvious that she did not love me, and we did not have any similarity or common things together. Regardless all that, we spent a lot of time together. we visited many new places, and a lot of fun. I have never regret being a friend for somene like her because when she told me the truth, I trusted her more. Now, we are best friends, and we start to see our similarities. Surprisingly, we have a lot of them.
Second, As our grandparents used to say, a liar and a lie are easy to be discovered. lies do not stay Hidden for a long time, and at the end they will be revealed in a bad way. Discovering lies after knowing and trusting others has many drawbacks, such as destroying relations, and having bad influnce on people feelings, which might lead to a bad health effect. Consequently, it is better to tell the truth from the beginning. For instance, back to my friend Noor example, if she did not tell me the truth about her feelings and about the purpose of her coming closer to me, I will be very disapointed. In fact, I might lose the trust in all people too. Therefore, it is better to know everything from the beginning. Even if it was hard to hear it, but it will be harder to accept it later.
In conclusion, I strongly think that it is better to tell thetruth rather than to be dishonest with people. It is not only because it helps in building the trust between people, but also it will overcome the bad drawbacks of the reveal of lies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26697892272 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52327982575 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515222482436 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0416455161 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9166666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7916666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.79166666667 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274589244736 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699524702956 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839740455322 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161670584264 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362772028885 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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