Sports or library?
We face many decisions in our routine life. Some young people prefer to do sports more than other works. However, some other spends most of their time in science related places like libraries. I think that both of these people can be successful in their work and future career if they understand their true ability.
First ability is interest and joy, if you have compassion for something and if you love a specific work, you are going to be successful in it. Because if you love something, you make time for it, try to develop in it and make sacrifices for a greater good. For example, my friend Lucas is a professional football player and he love doing it. So, he practices hard every day and spends most of his time in football fields to be a better player. Although he has not any vindicable educational record during his high school period or even now.
Also, some people who are curious and enjoy finding an explanation for everything may prefer to spend their time in libraries. But this does not mean that they cannot be good in other areas like sports. Humans have many different talents which can use them efficiently, if they nurtured properly during their childhood.
In conclusion, every person has the possibility to do so many things in life. They can do more than one kind of ambition or desire if it was thought to them and they present joy and talent in continuing to perform them.
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It's shocking that the game…
It's shocking that the game Slope 2 has also enslaved world-famous celebrities. What is it about this game that makes it so appealing? Slope 2 is a fun dribbling game that isn't easy to master. There's a lot to learn, so try it for yourself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
...s a professional football player and he love doing it. So, he practices hard every d...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing his high school period or even now. Also, some people who are curious and en...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...in other areas like sports. Humans have many different talents which can use them efficiently,...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d talent in continuing to perform them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.644 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45158234616 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6036425538 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9285714286 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0204587262976 0.236089414692 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00955607806759 0.076458572812 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034454929465 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.013718416722 0.150856017488 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023760994762 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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