Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
Every university student who decides to live on his own has to choose whether he prefers staying in the dormitories or in an apartment outside the campus. Each of these choices has its benefits and its drawbacks and the final decision depends mostly on the personality of each student.
On one hand, university housing could be a good deal for introverted people who have some difficulties while socializing with others. As a matter of fact, this option would force them to communicate and to create relationships with their roommates, and it would eventually improve their social skills. However, this choice is the right one also for extroverted people who are looking for friends who share the same academic interests. Indeed, living in a dorm would give them the opportunity to meet students from their same university and, sometimes, who have interests in the same major.
However, many pupils still prefer to live in private apartments, outside the campus. This choice is commonly due to a better autonomy and a quieter lifestyle. For instance, many campuses have some strict rules about the time you can have access to your room and about how many people you can invite. Therefore, the choice to live in an apartment would better fit if you do not want to lose your autonomy. Furthermore, the rooms of a university campus are very noisy since in many cases the space provided is small and shared with many people. Consequently, if you appreciate silence and you love studying at home, this could be the best option for you. Even if it seems to have many benefits, living outside the campus could be difficult if you do not like commuting to go to lessons.
In conclusion, the choice of the place to live while studying at university is very personal. Whereas living in the dormitories provides more occasions to socialize and to stay in the university scene, a private apartment is a more quiet and independent choice. Personally, I would prefer living outside the university because I hate having strict rules and, even if I like having an active social life, I prefer to keep some moments for myself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88611111111 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66729014702 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3164945822 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290086150117 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108085231756 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886613585478 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197313826212 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758131469626 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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