In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Some people think that it is better to do the work fast ,even though if some risks were developed. People think that with the development of the technology, our world is running so fast and we have to accommodate with our new life style. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that we should work slowly to get a better result in our life. The basis of my opinion is educational and financial.
Nowadays people should learn every thing correctly. Students in schools or universities should be taught in the proper way, employees in companies should do the work in the right way. If students start to study fast without focusing, and employees going to work fast and put themselves in front of risks, our world will devastate. I can recall an example to illustrate the idea nicely. I am working in a pharmacy, in the beginning, I start to work fast as I can, because our pharmacy is too busy and I can not accommodate the work condition there, but I recognize that I did many mistakes and my manger notify me. So I decided to work slowly and produce a better work. It ended up that I become more successful, I learned more and in the mean time i become faster with little mistakes. That is why I believe that working too fast will coming up with many un favorable mistakes.
In our world the work is the main source to gain money. If we work too fast and promote our selves and our job to risks that may lead to huge lose. Companies hire employees for their entire lives because they are working well, because employees benefit the companies, but what happen if those employees danger the companies than benefit it, the companies will fire them. Losing of money is danger not only to the company but also to the employee. For example, I have one of my friends who are working in a company. He was very careless about the company. He dose not care if the company lose or gain. He always does the work in hurry, he want to done with his work even if the work will promote some financial risk to the company. It ended up that the company fired him after he made a big lose to the company. That is why I consider working slowly is the best.
In conclusion, working slowly is more important and more productive for the person and for the work. Workings too fast will danger the company and will lead to a huge lose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4380733945 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40674373608 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451834862385 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2422582748 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.44 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.24 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246627212043 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776621906953 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768835716597 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173216618888 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518544729576 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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