TPO 19_ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, the thought of whether having a little knowledge about a wide range of topics instead of focusing in a major has turned into a controversial issue during recent decades which has obliged policymakers to recruit researchers in order to scrutinize the mentioned statement. Although a vast majority of people, if were asked, would disagree, some others have a positive attitude about the fact that has been illustrated. As far as my memory helps I’m in agreement with the latter group. because being deeply announced about a special subject not only contributes us to be more successful but also we can be counted as an expert who doesn't forget things which were taught.
Actually, improvement is counted as the most significant factor that persuades me to reinforce the claim that being an expert is definitely more vital than the second theory. In other words, when a person is a specialist not only can find a relevant job which causes his or her to make enough money but he or she also gradually will be progressed. Overall, all the more informed person, the more money that is paid to their efforts.
Indeed, if we know many majors superficially which are don't use daily, we will forget our information easily. Because repeating is the most effective fact that lead education to became knowledge. Actually, an investigation has been done for a company in order to choose better employers among candidates. Researchers have proved the fact that a person who has claimed that he or she can do several activities aren't practical enough for the office.
Although, in many universities, new fields have appeared which are a combination of two or three majors. For instance, I have studied a major which is contained both engineering and health issues called healthcare engineer. we have to solve hospitals problems by using statistical methods.
All in all, the country needs a person who is trained for a specific position, albeit some professors believe universities are utilizing multi-majors in order to gain more trustfulness results. In conclusion, if you have decided to be in industrial groups is better to improve your knowledge enough to be more prosperous; whereas, in academics research, you can enter to more than one fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 498, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...s;m in agreement with the latter group. because being deeply announced about a special ...
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Line 1, column 643, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...also we can be counted as an expert who doesnt forget things which were taught. A...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...now many majors superficially which are dont use daily, we will forget our informati...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... we will forget our information easily. Because repeating is the most effective fact th...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...n done for a company in order to choose better employers among candidates. Researchers...
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Line 9, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...hat he or she can do several activities arent practical enough for the office. A...
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Line 13, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...alth issues called healthcare engineer. we have to solve hospitals problems by usi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, second, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1018766756 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87441725915 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595174262735 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9484975223 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.9375 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115627029605 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350812348032 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267175545765 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635987112722 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296444976121 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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