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tpo 23

There are some people who may hold the view that these days people prefer to work quickly and accept the risks of error. That is, they pay less attention t accuracy of their work. On the other hand, there are some other people who take the opposite viewpoint and believe that nowadays it is more important for people to do their responsibilities correctly even if it takes more time. I personally agree with the second belief. Among the countless reasons which can support my idea, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones through following paragraphs.

First of all, one should take into account this significant fact that nowadays in the schools and universities students are taught to do their work correctly. In fact, one of the main purposes of education is preparing the students for the future in order to be conscientious persons in their lives and do their best to work carefully and accurately. For instance, I remember when I was in high school and also in university; almost all of our teachers obliged us to spend sufficient time to do our assignments. Actually, the only thing they care about was the accuracy of our work, So we learn to be patient and do our duties closely by spending plenty of times.

Another point supporting my opinion is that these days in nearly all countries, government employees are forced to allocate enormous time for work. As a matter of fact, in most of the societies an official should spend approximately eight hours for five days a week on work. As far as I am concerned, it seems to be adequate for them to do their jobs without making mistakes =. The question that comes to mind at this moment is that what happens if the employees are not permitted to do their job properly since they will be often concerned about remaining time. Consequently, they will make lots of mistakes.

Actually another subtle point which should be born in mind is that in today's world, virtually all projects and plans are accomplished and performed successfully. In my opinion doing the project progressively and successfully requires huge time and exactness; as a result, absolutely people should do their work slowly and carefully. According to the noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic released by a recent research conducted in our country, in the last ten years more than ninety percent of the projects were done successfully.

To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that these days it is more significant to work slowly and accurately rather than to work quickly and haphazardly. By and large I highly recommend that every person should try to work properly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will often be
...ted to do their job properly since they will be often concerned about remaining time. Consequ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'by and large', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196721311475 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.168032786885 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0676229508197 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0840163934426 0.046263068375 182% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0717213114754 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0348360655738 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81879844132 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0389344262295 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00204918032787 0.00188951952338 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860655737705 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204918032787 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016393442623 0.0139019557991 118% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2655.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88691796009 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319290465632 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239467849224 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188470066519 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130820399113 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81879844132 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538802660754 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.4039295557 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7368421053 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8561057328 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.736842105 120.699889404 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.6836270277 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.10126582278 1.45489161554 76% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112088375481 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0766248431521 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540765138828 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160098733518 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304379582812 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0585661843603 0.067059652881 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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