TPO-31- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, it was always important for people to feel satisfied with their lives. While someone believes that living in the past was more enjoyable and people were happier, others think that people aren’t so happy now due to speedy life. Personally, I agree with the first group. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, quick life make more chances for people to know and communicate with each other, so they can widen their minds and feel satisfied. To explain more, the most effective parameter that makes life alter very quickly is the improvement in technology and of course the advent of the internet. Today, everyone in all world has access to the smartphone and as a result has access to the internet, so the distance between people is very short and you can recognize other people from different countries and various cultures. Moreover, this decrease in distances can strengthen friendship among unknown people and this widespread communication can feel people’s hearts with satisfaction and gratefulness. My own experience is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, when I bought my first smartphone and knew the world of the internet, I started to spend my time in social networks. There were many chat rooms that different people could speak with each other. There I found one of my best friends from Spain, the country I might never travel to, but that application was the reason to find my dear friend and now I feel so happy to spend my time with her.
Secondly, quick changes in life mean that there are many new things waited for people to happen and this can be exciting for any individual who likes to encounter novel things. To clarify my points, these rapid changes in people's lives may help them to improve their skills and deal with various challenges. Consequently, they can define a goal for themselves and make their attempts to achieve the goal and feel prosperous. For instance, one of my friends who was working for a company lost his job due to the problems that one of his colleagues made for him. After that, he was seeking for a new job and he understood it’s better for him to change his field of work. Therefore, he started to improve his other skills and after some months, he found a very well-paid job. If he hadn’t changed his field of working and hadn't improved his skills, he wouldn’t have found that well-paid job.
In conclusion, I believe that rapid changes in people's lives can help them to feel more convinced. This is because not only they can have more communication and friendship, but also define many goals and try to achieve success. (38 min)
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 819, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...hadn’t changed his field of working and hadnt improved his skills, he wouldn’t have f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76394849785 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53055159116 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519313304721 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9466582169 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38095238095 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21940726012 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711456474994 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612697242362 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14652779041 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771903238515 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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