TPO 35 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
family:"Arial Rounded MT Bold",sans-serif">Without a shadow of the doubt, all the people want to have privacy in their lives. athlete and famous people always want to have privacy life and don’t share their sadness time or happy like with others like everyone. According to my own experience of life and actual observation of life have led me to be agree with this fact. I delve into many reason to substantial my point.
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family:"Arial Rounded MT Bold",sans-serif">The first and possibly the paramount consequential reason is this, people want to be famous and well known but when they be famous and well know they faced with some problems like lost the privacy life. they tend to go outside with their family and friends and spend good time with them but all the people rush into place where the famous people in their and disturb them, then take photo and give sign and something like that. At this time not only athlete even their friend and family be upset.
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family:"Arial Rounded MT Bold",sans-serif">Another point springing in my mind is that, all the people have sadness time and happy time someone tend to share it with others and someone not.one of other problem about famous people is, magazines they always seeking to find something for share in their magazine and newspaper, because of this some of this newsman always stay outside of the famous people’s home and work place and even their family and friends home to fined news about them. some of magazines share false news about them to sell a lot of magazine and their site have big visitor, and this make famous and athlete upset and disturb and they lost their privacy lives.
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family:"Arial Rounded MT Bold",sans-serif">To sum it all up, by taking all the details into consideration, famous entertainer and athletes deserve to have more privacy than have now, because of peoples and magazines. I hope the days all the people respect the famous people’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51775147929 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.69390516544 2.67179642975 176% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443786982249 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.52272551 48.9658058833 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.545454545 100.406767564 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137519767523 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075077174381 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392026944591 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755840218446 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700982344746 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 11.7677419355 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 58.1214874552 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.