TPO 37- Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Doing tasks in the best way is an important matter for companies and people. As you know, the consequences of a bad performance could be very harmful in different aspects. Time impact and cost impacts are two important issues which companies are worried about them invariably. Some people believe that people fulfill their duties rarely due to their mental or physical engagement. I don't agree with this group and I think individuals are more conservative about their works. I will substantiate my notion in the following paragraphs.
The first thing coming to my mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that level of literate and sophisticated people has been soared unpredictably and employees have countless rivals for their current job position. As a result, they struggle to fulfill their tasks in an acceptable and valuable way because the first mistake could be the last one. In order to shed lights in this matter I share one of my personal experiences. I found my job one year ago. I had four thousands rivals for my present occupation and the majority of them were well-educated persons. Therefore, I know if I couldn't cope with my duties, I will be fired easily. As you can see, people are more prudent about their tasks nowadays.
The second reason behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that individuals are more informed these days due to their easy access to vast information sources. Moreover, people have great connections with well-educated or professional masters because of technological advances such as internet and smart phones. As a result, their ability for dealing with difficult tasks has been increased markedly. For example, I take a very complicated subject for my master degree thesis. At the first sight, my friends thought that I couldn't finish the project but I tried very hard and the role of information resources that I could find in the internet and the professors which I consulted with them thorough the mobile applications are unignorable.
In brief, I should aver that people could culminate their duties nowadays better than the past because not only they feel the danger of firing their jobs because of great number of educated people but also they have access to great information and connection resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in brief, such as, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03968253968 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79501454809 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6272967777 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.263157895 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124799683909 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356017114406 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037565549402 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837581561217 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255547976589 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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