TPO 39 - Independent task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, the thought of whether finding an appropriate job which contributes people to be more successful was easier in the past compared to nowadays has turned into a controversial issue during recent decades as far as a hundreds of research have been done by scholars. Some people if were asked would disagree with the mentioned statement; while, others have positive attitude toward this point of view. As far as my memory helps, I have been in agreement with the latter group because people in the past had more ability to decide about their future; moreover, changes in society is high enough that people have been constrained to select a secure career. The knowledge of people has been dramatically increased that has limited people.
On the one hand, stable condition is counted as a factor that help people to be able to choose a useful career which can anticipate people's future situation; on the other hand, in such a technological era, all aspects of life are altering so much that the youth even can't distinct which major is more practical for the end of the year which they live in it. Although the changes make our lives more convenient, it leads country to be unstable in some facets.
Actually, in the past people inclined to some special jobs such as agriculture which lead them to be a rich person in society; therefore, they didn't think that others career will be convert to better job which effects the prosperity; hence, a person who paid a little more attention could be recruited in a federal position or invented a personal job. Indeed, people in the past had more possibility to identify the best careers.
Albeit, as mentioned above choosing a career which acknowledge triumph was easier in the past, people access to more resource including internet and virtual world to recognize which career is more helpful; furthermore, because of the considerable raise in population and improving the technology, the number of job position has become more diverse which causes people to have more work position in order to choose.
All in all, one cannot neglect the fact that the number of people who has been prospers in the past are extremely higher than successful people during recent years. For instance, Aniston who explored gravity is can be counted as mentioned people. In conclusion, in my home country the job offers are so limit that obliged people to choose a career which doesn't guarantee future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a hundred'
Suggestion: a hundred
...l issue during recent decades as far as a hundreds of research have been done by scholars....
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hundred' or simply 'hundreds'?
Suggestion: a hundred; hundreds
...l issue during recent decades as far as a hundreds of research have been done by scholars....
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re altering so much that the youth even cant distinct which major is more practical ...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...rich person in society; therefore, they didnt think that others career will be conver...
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Line 17, column 355, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...obliged people to choose a career which doesnt guarantee future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94660194175 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5822265596 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.240108562 48.9658058833 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.833333333 100.406767564 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1225135274 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051273956147 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309617625395 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738569941696 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267012903009 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.