TPO 42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The entrance into the technological era leads to the specialization and professionism of workers. instead of being a versatile person such as farmers who can cultivate multiple crops, workers nowadays tend to only be capable of what they serve as. From my perspective, it is not beneficial for their psychological health. As a matter of fact, specialized workers usually receive much less satisfication from their work.
It is easy to realize that specialized workers usually do the same type work all day long, which means they cannot receive positive feedbacks from work. what they do and their production remain unchanged. today is the exact copy of yesterday, and tomorrow is the exact copy of today. Their work can be practised by muscle meomory rather than thought. such a dull working condition will exhaust workers enthusiasm and aggravate their sense of resposibility towards jobs. Under such circumstances, working is a suffering instead of an achievement.
In contrast, a versatile worker's life is a kind of discovery. granted, he may not be as proficient as specialized workers, but he will always have oppportunity to swift his thouught. For example, after a day of packing the goods, he can then allocate the distribution of goods to facilitate future packing. By apply experience from other field into current work, versatile workers can make advancement on their workload. they can discover what specialized workers can never realize. granted, less proficiency means less production in a given time, but in the long term, versatile ones can even produce more. At the same time, the innovation process can bring much more gratification.
As a result, entrepreneurs should not lay all their emphasis on specialized workers. On the contrary, workers should seek more versatile jobs in order to enchance their sense of achievement. In a rapidly changing society, being a generalist means better ability to get accustomed with the emerging oppoertunity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... by muscle meomory rather than thought. such a dull working condition will exhaust w...
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Suggestion:
... jobs. Under such circumstances, working is a suffering instead of an achievement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29392971246 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05825070017 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8552854777 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.85 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892851262938 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288804818127 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436973079171 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541392635384 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374424268461 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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