TPO 42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Contemporary human lives in a sophisticated world where changing acquiring at a galloping rate. it is very integral for workers to have a prosperous time in their work place and have a pleasant sense about their works. The controversial question which arises here is whether employees have a sense of satisfaction when they involve with different tasks or do similar tasks. If I were to choose one of these conditions, I would definitely like to engage with diverse tasks. it is my firm believe that by doing various tasks I feel a sense of satisfaction for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To being with, one should take into account the fact that struggling with various tasks allows me to focus on a specific subject better rather than doing a broad overview. Thus, I never lose my concentration because I have to be familiar with different fields to lead my works toward success, so I have a sense of satisfaction. my own experience is a compelling answer. when I was a freshman I worked as an intern in the local magazine that was adjacent to my home. I had to do many tasks to show that I am such a skillful person. although doing different tasks was demanding for me, I could easily focus on my tasks better and maximize my efficiency, for I had a thriving time there. Had I struggled with same tasks, I would not have focused on my works, and never be satisfied about my job.
The second remarkable reason is when we attempt to engage with different tasks, this helps us to be aware of the status quo of the country and manage our activities according to situations. Not only can we boost our creativity because we have instructive information about various fields, but also we are more satisfied about our job. my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. following my graduation from university, I drew up plans to start a small software development firm. my plan was unexceptionally detailed and involved various tasks that I had to do. As a result, I had to increase my knowledge about economics and politics conditions in my country and managed my works fruitfully. I got familiar with different fields, so it assisted me to amplify my creativity and had a sense of satisfaction.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we have to following different tasks because we readilly focus on a specific subjects and because we learn different field and it helps us to think creatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76267281106 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9250487321 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509216589862 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1415544189 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.35 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205275682743 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683727846087 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074228780936 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133147427974 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496390109376 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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