TPO 48- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, in such sophisticated life organization has turned into a controversial issue during recent decades which has obliged schools' principals to add a relevant course in order to train more neat people who are able to plan their lives' events and steps. Although a vast majority of people disagree with the fact that in the complicated world people have to be enabled to regulate their works and time, some others have a positive attitude toward the mentioned statement. As far as I'm concerned, I extremely support the thought. The reasons to reinforce my perspectives are declared hereunder.
The first and foremost reason for the aforementioned notion is that time is so limited in the globe where people are involved in many aspects of life that people must manage their deeds in order to meet their needs. If people don't have a distinct plan for the restricted hours of days, they will not be capable to do all of the essential phrases which they are compelled to fulfill. the organization's methods are being used in a wide range of projects in various subjects including political topics, engineering projects, educational researches, etc. For instance, for constructing a building, a well-known software has been developed so as to schedule the works an the time of the tasks in order. Hence, for saving time and avoiding wasting time people should have a logical plan in all facets of life.
Another conspicuous reason for the above-stated claim, which should be mentioned here, is that in order to be a prosperous person we should organize their aims specifically in the technological world. Actually, for being successful young people should follow many smaller goals which force them to have a short-term plan. For example, for finding an appropriate position in a high-level university, students have to prepare a proper CV which is included articles, grades, and other futures. Thus, the student should have practical strategies for achieving prosperity.
All in all, one cannot neglect the fact that it is vital for the youth to have the ability of programming to spend their time efficiency on the beneficial tasks. the hypothesize has turned into a crucial issue in modern societies. it will contribute people to spend time and energy in the best ways; in addition, it causes people to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0861618799 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8420674364 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563968668407 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9373343052 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227822241065 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737363035394 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426412957916 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134302069506 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255746475581 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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