TPO 52 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
On every list of crucial responsibilities of government, endorsing legislation ranks near the top. countries have their own specific rules and everyone should follow them. The controversial question which arises here is whether these rules are too strict that young people obey them or not. It is my firm belief that gentle legislations are more useful for everyone especially youngers for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, in my opinion, tightening rules and make them too strict has never worked. If we look at our past and the history of laws that were implemented by governments, it is obvious that forcing people did not make anything better, though made it worse. Youngsters have significant roles in every society. So, it is better to not make them malcontent. That is why the rules should be balanced.
The second reason, which I think is significant too, is that we see more violence among youngers. Usually, the violence comes from discontent. people can not say their thoughts freely and easily because of some strict rules. Anarchy happens among people, as a result of discontent and unhappiness. As a consequence of disorder in society, the government should execute other strict rules. For example, in our country women were not allowed to ride a bicycle in public places. At first, some girls or women obey the rule, but others did not pay attention and caused extra illiberal rules against them.
Last but not least, the more strict rules Hindered the progress of the youth. Recently, we do not see sophistication or excitement among youngers to follow their goals, since they are not allowed to do different things. In contrast, when the government establishes rules that are not tough, adolescents generate both short and long goals according to these laws, and they steadily endeavor for their objects to achieve them. For example, after graduation, I planned to start my own business and firm. Because of hard laws, I could not follow my dream and I felt disappointed.
To sum up, as I mentioned above strict rules have severe consequences. The consequence of strict rules are, more violent, killing the spirit of flourishing, and rules become useless basically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, for example, i think, in contrast, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06989247312 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76193946914 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7366755896 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1739130435 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184633459678 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491228418727 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469987715637 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102473902005 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280529987566 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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