TPO 53-do you agree or disagree with the statement. it is more important for the government to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation. use specific examples and reasons to support your opinion.
By and large, beyind doubt it is established that the internet has a great significant influence upon our lives and it can not be denyed that these days we are pretty much have become accustomed to it and any progress and development in this industry is apprieciated. However, the public transportation is one of the most important factors that can be mentioned when the quality of life is questioned in a particular city. These days the goverments projects for spending money has brought people and politics into controversy; personalt talking I would rather the budgets being spent on transportation. In what follows I will delve into some conspicuous reasons of my view on this issue.
The first exequit point to be mentioned is that, these that air pollution and the increasing heat of the atmosphere and the surfae of the planet has become one of the most chalenging issue all over the world and improving the pblic transportation looks like a perfect scheme to put a stop to the contigency of the extinction of myrids of spicies and the mekting of the polar ices. This issue can not be solved just by one country and it is crutial for all the societies to get united for overcoming the situation. the airpollution that prvate cars cause these days is one of the significant roleplayers in this disaster. In addition development in public transportation might be a big step to take.
Another subtle point to be mentioned is that the time and the both human and feel energy source that is being wased in heavy traffics in the large cities around the world is a undeniable fact. If the publictransportation was equipt with the adequate amnities that the people desire, there would be a noticiable decrease of using private cars. For instance, in my country the subway trains are too crowded and regarding to the fact that are not on time I utterly prefer my own car for transporting rather than the subway. Or as another example the buses in my city are too noicy and old; whenever I use them I suffer a unfavorable headache and dizziness.
On the other hand with the expantion of the technology it is becoming hard to keep up with the highly developed countries around the world and the internet plays a significant role in this development. Higher internet speed servises means that the informention exchanging is happening with more conciderable quality and quantity owing to this, lots of time and both human and economical resorces are being saved. Therefor the effect this scheme has on both indivitual and the goverment is crystal clear.
Due to the aformentioned ground, I can neither deny the benefits that the internet has nor pass the option of developed-transportation. Contemporating from all the factors and reasons the publictransportation is more beneficial for the society and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9012605042 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10956945262 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7506049393 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.235294118 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135638120702 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423247870265 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270927338815 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759670746005 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179211782316 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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