TPO26(independent)
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents jobs.
jobs is one of the most important issue in human life. We can afford our living by making money throuhg our job. some people think that choosing parent's career by thier childeren is a good approach to pick up a child's job when he grow up, while others think more openly. I personally believe that it is not necessary that childeren choose their parents job, however it may has some advantage but essentially there is no gaurrenty to be success for this situaation.
First, in the new world there are alot of job oportunities which they were not in the last decades. With this high speed pace of change which technology brings in our life, demand and supply in the job market is changing very much. I read an article about job position in north U.S in pervious two decades and the difference between them was so clear. Nowadays, there are a lot job position ion the telecommunication and computer software fields which nobody knows about them last decades. Practicaly many of our parent's job are changed completely which they cannot instruct the new job requirment to their childeren. If anybody want to follow his parent's job, he should be ready to study a lot more about htem because these huge change.
second, every child has different interest or potential that may or may not match with their parents interest. when a person want to choose a job, there are a lot of factor wich should be considered. Practically, person's interest is the most important factor should be considered. Interst and willingness is so much strong motivation for doing any thing. this psychologically factore intrigue person to work eagerly and when he or she start to work which loves that he or she tries to do is best.The job that every body likes is actually as a hobby; in this circumstence the efficacy of work increase exponentially.
Third, of course choosing our parents jobs has somoe benefits like being educated with working with the best tutor all time and saveing time and money to be master in that career, but you should like your parents job and it should not be a abondend career. it should has a good future prespective that absorb your interest.
In conclusion, I bekieve that it is not nesessary that childeren choose their parents career because job market is so changable and a lot of new jobs will apear in near future that were not at all . however transfering of jobs in a family has some advantages, it requires some important conditions like as childeren, job future situation, and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, while, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8119266055 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62574819171 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511467889908 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3730867894 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.421052632 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365077973965 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120554013534 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803475099373 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224827319592 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619374421791 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.