At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
At Universities and colleges have given good education to students. Personally, I believe that sport and social activities should receive important and equal financial support as classes and libraries in Universities and colleges. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, classes and libraries are provided education for become educated person. The student should be well aware about important of socializing as well as various sports, because these activities give motivation. Motivation is essential factor to get success. It will increase the mental strength of the student. The student get bare win and fail. It is very important to life. Student get experiences how to work with team. The student conflict with others and learn how to contribute to the team. Some students who have a voice in making decision will no doubt feel better and give great impact. Also, student learn get responsibilities doing social and sport activities. Doing these activities, they expose to the world. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was studying in university, I take part in our cultural show. I got to know many people more than that while in lecture hall. I got responsibilities by my side and I done it perfectly. So, I feel precious of myself. All the approaches help me to improve my attitude.
Secondly, college and universities sports are great platform for student who want to be a part of national sport leagues. This good approach for get to know people who are in outside. It will be big benefit. For instance, one of my friend got university colors. Also, she had many posts in the various societies and active member in those. At last, she got good job opportunity.
Finally, it would be better to give equal financial importance to sport and other social activities. If there are many facilities to sports ,many students can participate. Also,
In conclusion, I strongly believe that that sport and social activities should receive important and equal financial support as academic. This is because it essential factor to get success student before living to world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05027932961 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83040159418 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516759776536 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9336607712 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2666666667 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.56666666667 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323120844876 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750413033124 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158315037563 0.0737576698707 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241785663313 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153780039789 0.0645574589148 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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