What are some of the characteristics of a good parent?
Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
From infancy, people search for role models to emulate, and without a doubt, the most important role model in our lifetime is our parents. There is no perfect parent in the world, and no single criterion can gauge whether a person is a good one. However, in my opinion, discipline, love, and patience are the three most crucial characteristics of a good parent.
The primary job of parents is to breed the children until they grow up, hoping they can fit into society well. Without discipline, the children may behave unrulily. While parents may protect their children when the kids are young, they must teach their kids discipline. These disciplines include respect for others, social etiquette, and being polite. On the other hand, being the role model for children, parents should also lead a life of self-discipline. Children look upon their parents to learn how to behave appropriately. Therefore, parents must set standards not only for children but also for themselves.
Second, love is also indispensable. No love and all discipline will make the family seem like the military or a company. In a firm, there is strict discipline, and if employees disobey the law, they may get laid off. Nonetheless, in a family, if the child misconducts, will the parent lay the child off? Certainly no. Parents take care of the children not because they can bring profits but because they love their children. A qualified parent will do many for their children. Nevertheless, a loving parent will sacrifice a lot more.
Last but not least, good parents are patient parents. Everything takes time to develop, and children are no exception. Specifically, children are prone to making mistakes, again and again. It requires love and patience to care for the children. When I was young, my mother told stories to me when I was in bed. Although I couldn't remember what she had said the next day, my mother would not be annoyed. Instead, she would tell the same story again the next day. Not until she told a story more than a dozen times had I remembered it. To this day, I could still remember the stories, not just the plot but also the scenes of my mother speaking softly beside my bed.
No one can deny the importance of parenting in the development of children. I believe that discipline, love, and patience are the essential parts of a good parent. Hopefully, when I grow up, I can also be a good parent like my mother.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81339712919 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68124084118 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511961722488 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3243887804 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3793103448 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4137931034 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72413793103 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111594009131 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353855138886 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420388981185 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790181140234 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366860184101 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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