When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why?
Physical education, music and art are important aspect of life in a student's mind. They help in building a student's character. If the school does not have enough funding and they might have difficulty in choosing between physical education or music and art. Physical education would have an edge over art and music to be retained.
First, physical education is important for a healthy lifestyle. In today's world, where fastfood chain is growing, it is developing an unhealthy lifestyle among people. Children are developing unhealthy eating habbit, which leads to obesity. They are not completing their full nutrition demand for the day. Therefore, obesity is on a rise and it is leading to various diseases. Long school hours and loads of homework is also cutting short the time where students can have their excercise. Therefore, sports is needed for a healthy development of a child.
Another reason is that students get an opportunity to apply for sports scholarships. All the colleges seek for students who are good at sports and decent at studies. They provide scholarships to students who excel in sports. Therefore, physical education at school opens up opprtunity for an average academic student to get a chance to afford for college. That can lead to a good professional sports player.
Finally, physical education build character in a person. As physical education requires coordination of mind and body, it improves the coordination of a student. It also builds the concentration level in a students. Physical eduaction is important to generate a sense of discipline in life. For example, a sports that is played as a team create a sense of togetherness in between the players. It teaches players to take care of each other and have their back.
Altough, art and music is important aspect of life. In the circumstances where there is lack of funding, physical education should be chosen over art and music. Physical education creates a healthy life, give scholarship opprtunities and builds a character of a person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e. That can lead to a good professional sports player. Finally, physical education...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
... also builds the concentration level in a students. Physical eduaction is important to gen...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
...nse of discipline in life. For example, a sports that is played as a team create a sense...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14457831325 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89625623671 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503012048193 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6292184204 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.32 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.28 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182715775191 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538339373997 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698225189612 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119044301261 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804637644699 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.