When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
finding information about the problem using the Internet
taking a long time to think about the problem
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Everyone confronts different troubles during their lifetime, thus they solve these problems with divergent ways regarding of their personal aspect and taste. Personally, I believe that pondering about the problem that I face may facilitate the solution. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, people feel anxious when complication arises, which makes the situation even worse. On the other hand, individuals can calm themselves by considering about circumstance for sufficient extent of time. Afterwards, they will be available to improve the situation thanks to the composure and consideration. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, I was depressed because I had been incapable of comprehending the concept of physics. In fact, I could not find any method to improve the condition although I asked graduate students of physics, and searched advice from the “Google”. Hence, I dropped the course, and thought about the situation until the next semester. Afterwards, I understood that I was failing to understand the lesson because my depression and health disorder was interfering with studying process. As soon as I see the light of trouble’s cause, I began calming myself, and study the course. Fortunately, I received full scale on the physics course because I learned topics after becoming calm.
Secondly, people are unavailable to comprehend others situation, which means that information on the internet and advice from others may be unhelpful for others. I am sure that universal advice which can solve problems of every individual, does not exist. On the other hand, people can understand their own situation comprehensively and accurately if they analyze it for the sufficient amount of time. For instance, my companion asked me for advice about how to ace test of a mathematics test within three months because he considered me advanced mathematics learner. Of course, I provided the answer to his question by stating necessary things I experienced. Unfortunately, I, who studied mathematics for ten years, failed to give apt answer. Thereby, my partner failed the test because he tried to study things that I have learned for ten years within only three months. If he had thought about his own situation rather than following advice of person who does not know his situation, he would have found suitable solution to his problem.
Finally, majority of people seem being loath to follow others’ instruction, which makes them reluctant maximize their potential in order to make things better. Conversely, most people as well as me will immerse themselves while attempting to achieve things which they considered necessary. Therefore, possibility of succeeding will increase because they will be assiduous about the situation.
In summation, I am of the opinion of contemplating for enough amount of time whenever I face difficulty in my life. This is because I will become less anxious while figuring out things, others cannot comprehend my situation, and I will be happy to follow my own idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in fact, of course, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2639.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30985915493 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.942053112 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543259557344 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 815.4 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7817282312 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1153846154 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200589264313 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532513207158 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555565760124 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109887117525 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728111620802 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.