The wide spread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today’s world?
Most of the people agree that the internet affects society in various ways. In my opinion, the most prominent effect of the internet is that it has strengthened democracy. In ensuing paragraphs, I will explain my reasons.
First, the easy access of information help people to save significant amount of time in their everyday life. For example, if I want to know how much money I have on my deposit account, I use the internet that saves time without trouble of getting to the bank or to an ATM machine. If I want to buy tickets for a game, I do not have to go to the ticket booth, I can buy tickets online within a couple of minutes. Apparently, easy access to information through internet saves people a significant amount of time.
Secondly, internet has been of great use in education and research department for everyone from students to teachers to researchers or fellow scientist. Students can attend various online seminars, undergo different e-trainings and watch through educational lectures by great professors from high ranked universities on the internet itself. Moreover, the research workers and scientists can access numerous and unending digital library of international journals and works published by different contributors in their field on Internet.
Lastly, internet help people in reduction of crime in the society. Government get information about the suspect easily and quickly. It will help them to solve their case without any hassles. Research illustrated that data analysis and statistics help government a lot to reduce crime as they can access this information with help of the internet.
In summary, the Internet has brought huge revolution in today’s world. Internet has myriad advantages, few are like saving time, providing education and increasing awareness of people about the world around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATM'.
Suggestion: ATM
...trouble of getting to the bank or to an ATM machine. If I want to buy tickets for a game, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22972972973 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89024169892 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.734455972 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226172306206 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769791213941 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588776641494 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117935715915 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495968868381 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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