The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?
A glance at how increased abvailability to information affected people's life always brings to light question that has several provoked discussions, that is, whether the accessibility to various informaiton source positively influenced people's life. Some might contend that wide rage of privacy invasions and unfiltered hatreds toward minor people are a serious side effects of internet. However, I would like to suggest that internet has some of it's brilliant aspect that can couterpart these flaws, in terms of effective traveling method and rapid communication. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed some light on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned firstly is that internet abled people to travel effectively and inexpensively. For example, if the wifi is connected, google gps allows you to find your destination, calculations the duration of journey, and shows what kind of transportation is the fastest. This made the previous and conventional way of tour business weakened and less demanding, which used to cost a lot of money for the tourist. Instead, young people who are adapted to using googling prior to their trip got more chance of wondering cheaply and independently.
Another point here to be mentioned is that internet clearly made communication fast. There is tons of SNS and internet based news companies that offers subscribers the latest news around the world. And among all the media prevailing in the ocean of internet, Twitter carries news in the fastest speed. For example, I catch the terror attack news that happened in Syria, within 10 minutes or so. This is because twitter is time-line based media with the limitation of 140 letters to be written, which gives it an instant and a fleeting character.
Although the aforementioned points cross the mind at the first look, it does not mean that they are the only one. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. It should be noted that internet offers a lot of free lecture, which facilitates people access to knowledge equally. For example, Khan Academy, one of a first knowledge-sharing online lecture ran by voluntary work of scholars around the world, have been uploaded over 20,000 videos related to basic and advanced mathmatics. A lot of people get benefits from such a free lecture platform.
Due to the above statements, I firmly believe that internet has given people a positive effect in today's world, and specially the way of new traveling and the quickend communicaton are two primary and conspicuous reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... toward minor people are a serious side effects of internet. However, I would like to s...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are tons'?
Suggestion: There are tons
...ternet clearly made communication fast. There is tons of SNS and internet based news companie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1757719715 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90370113835 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61757719715 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.290028659 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.684210526 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201594128007 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494629894413 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545134733939 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993099047371 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402739466437 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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