. Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
A successful man set his goal for life. He or she has a plan, which lead them towards ultimate success. The prompt states that young people should pursue long term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition. I mostly accede to the assertion and argue that for success in life one should chase his long term and realistic goal rather than instant fame and recognition. However, sometimes an innovative idea or plan may not be realistic, but it may open a new scope for-- the world.
Firstly, in general case to be successful in life one need a long-term plan and need to set a pursuable goal. For example many university students in Bangladesh are busy in their campus in student politics and they act like that the politics is their fundamental work to do, of course some of them are dedicated in politics and in future may become a successful politician, who will do something for the betterment of the country. However, maximum of the student politicians have plan to get fame and recognition in the campus. The statistics of the country shows that major portion of those students cannot pass their graduation and fail in politics. The example shows that the steps taken by the students for immediate fame and recognition, ultimately bring them failure in life. If they were attentive in their study and research, then they may get a way to success in life. Thus, for success one need to have long term plan.
Secondly, steps for instant success is harmful and one may suffer for long for those steps. For instance, one want to be body builder by one month. To pursue his goal he admitted in a gym and ask the instructor to make him a giant body builder just in a month. The instructor offer him many medicine and supplement. He started to take those medicines and after some days, his muscles started to balloon and just in a month, he has looked like a body builder just doing a little exercise. However, after a year he felt that he become bulky and his muscle grow abnormal and most seriously, he is weaker than the previous year. This example illustrates that pursuing an instant success and fame, someone has a chance to do his own peril. Thus, action taken for instant success and recognition can be deleterious in long term and even permanently.
However, in some cases especially in science a phantasmagorical idea and goal may lead oneself to a novel discovery. For example Galileo statement about the rotation of the earth. At his time people believed that the sun rounds around the earth. Galileo started to tell that the statement is wrong rather the earth rounds around the sun. People started to lough at him and threw him in prison for this idiosyncratic statement. However, he was obstinate about his statement and now we all know that Galileo was very true. A college student may has a plan to live in the Mars. It may seem surreal now, but may be in near future it will be possible for the human to make habitation in the Mars by using advance science and technology. The examples show us the thing, which seems unrealistic, may become realistic in future and may open a new scope for us. Hence, sometime nonrealistic goal may lead us to a new discovery.
In conclusion, in some cases especially in science and technology, an imaginary goal may lead to new successful discovery, but it is clear that in general cases one young man need to focus on long-term and realistic goals rather than the immediate fame and recognition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...maximum of the student politicians have plan to get fame and recognition in the camp...
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Line 3, column 919, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
...Thus, for success one need to have long term plan. Secondly, steps for instant su...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medicine seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much medicine', 'a good deal of medicine'.
Suggestion: much medicine; a good deal of medicine
...st in a month. The instructor offer him many medicine and supplement. He started to take thos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, of course, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2877.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 611.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70867430442 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60958740034 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427168576105 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 904.5 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9454147044 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8064516129 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7096774194 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29032258065 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264142937029 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775456805731 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132017478195 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192523121605 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131606416743 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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