Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
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young people are very important in our society. we spend all time of our life in our society where we were born and became mature. Some believe young people have influence on the important decision that determine the future of society. Others disagree. In my view, young people have impact on the future of society for two important reason.
The main reason is that the society can is progressed by young people. when you use of young person who have motivation, country can progress faster than you use old person. For example, when I was 18 years old I had dream that I became more beneficial for my neighborhood. One day, I wanted to register in Student Council but my manager rejected me because I didn't qualify. After a while, I said him that I motivate for this situation and I convinced him who was very unfriendly. Fourthly, I could win my school on talent test. if they had trusted me early, we could have win on contest. As you can see, young people have motivation to change everything.
The another reason is that the young people increase defense of country. when you have a lot of active youth, you will strengthen army and these people can make sense of enforcement for all society.
For instance, when I was 24 years old, my country are attacked by ARAGH. Although I had to study in Canande university, I went back promptness to my country. Unfortunately, we failed because of lack of young people. if we had increased our population, we might have won in fighting. Therefore, my country decided that each family had to at least three children. This experience taught me that society can reinforce with young people.
In sum, young people have impact on the future of society and have positive roles. Not only do young people cause to progress in country but they also increase defense of country. we should all believe this people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69512195122 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53458381397 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496951219512 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9843699104 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9565217391 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2608695652 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29741301603 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951499914186 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115582760016 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189075415248 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100635834806 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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