Agree or disagree: Gender inequality will never be eliminated.
Nowadays, equality has been a thorny issue since the turn of the century. In the past, there were many kinds of issues of discrimination around the world, like slavery. With the passing of time, however, the word "Equal" has been emphasized, and people have taken part in a demo of discrimination. Personally, I believe that the gender gap will be solved in the future. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, many people have been recognizing that women have enormous power to change our world in a positive way. Some countries have many female politicians and even governments. More specifically, they have more than 40% female politicians.One cannot deny that there is still discrimination and it is difficult to solve quickly. However, people's concerns and recognition, I believe, are the most important things to change people's biases.
Secondly, precedent is a key to following other countries. For instance, the revolution is a good example. A certain country, in the past, caused revolution to change their environment or social system because they could not endure any more. As a result, they succeeded in abdicating their king. After this event, many countries' people had the possibility to change their harsh status quo, and they accomplished getting their rights. Like this chain, we can follow other countries' good customs. Therefore, opposition to the gender gap will be propagated around the world in the future.
On a final note, people's recognition and precedence play a vital role in changing our bad customs, such as gender inequality. Therefore, I totally disagree that the gender gap will ever be liquidated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 275.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21454545455 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01006575805 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0847714947 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3529411765 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124172322971 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502095191638 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956227734236 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950837870306 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795795270248 0.0443174109184 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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