In the past, eating avocados was not considered to be necessarily beneficial. Being unaware of their beneficial properties, people used them mostly as avocado oil for different purposes. It wasn't until recently that the advantages of consuming avocados were noticed.
First of all, avocados have vital nutrients that help in lowering blood pressure. They contain as many as 20 kinds of vitamins and minerals. To be specific, avocados are rich in phytonutrients and folic acid. These nutrients are known to be beneficial especially in lowering blood pressure.
Secondly, avocados are good for a healthy pregnancy. As mentioned above, they are known to be rich in folic acid. Folic acid does not just lower blood pressure but also reduces the risk of miscarriage and neural tube defects during pregnancy.
Lastly, eating avocados can also save a lot of money. Some vegetarians tend to eat avocados because they taste similar to meat products and seafood. In this sense, people can save money by eating the meat-flavored fruit since meat is more expensive than vegetables in general.
The Reading and Lecture are both about the fruit called "Avocado" and their advantages and disadvantages. During the past years the significance of avocado has not been truly identified by the peoples, rather they only used the oil which has been produced through avocados. It's been only recently , the advantages of avocados has been identified. The author of the reading feels that avocados contains vital nutrients which can be used for the human body. The lecturer, however challenges this by pointing out some of the counter points that are mentioned by author.
Firstly, the author argues that avocados fruits contains so much of nutrients which can be used for lowering blood pressure of the human being . The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that , the fats that is contained in the avocados is just too much for the human to consume, which therefore results in increasing the overall body weight.
Secondly, the writer suggests that this fruits can be regarded as the beneficial for the pregnant women, as it helps in lowering the chances of miscarriage of the child and natural tube might not get defects. But this claims has been countered by the lecturer. He is of the points that, consuming too much of the avocados fruits would hinder the progress of the child during the pregnancy, as the fetus could not consume this fruit.
Finally, the author posits that the taste of the avocados is similar to that of the meat and sea products which could be the replacement for the vegetarian one to consume and also this is not so much expensive. But the lecturer challenges this points by mentioning that this fruit is so much costly that it could be as similar to buying the dozen of bananas and apples. And also the maintenance for this fruits is too much expensive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...through avocados. Its been only recently , the advantages of avocados has been ide...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...however challenges this by pointing out some of the counter points that are mentioned by au...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...wering blood pressure of the human being . The specific argument is challenged by ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...allenged by the lecturer. He claims that , the fats that is contained in the avoca...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...egnancy, as the fetus could not consume this fruit. Finally, the author posits that...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...allenges this points by mentioning that this fruit is so much costly that it could b...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd apples. And also the maintenance for this fruits is too much expensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 308.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87987012987 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65193206262 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461038961039 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7647841745 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241372039332 0.272083759551 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895587432904 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643851320628 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155450104039 0.162205337803 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482773300653 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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