revolutionary rules
The reading is about the issue that new regulation for handling and storage of coal ash is not indispensable; furthermore, they may have negative effects on companies and the cost of electricity, but the speaker holds the opposite view about this assert which is explained below.
The first rule which authorities should adapt is firms have to harness liner in every new landfill they construct but the professor asserts that not only the new landfills should have liners but also do the old ones have liners, due to the fact that old sites are insufficient and release a bulk of impurities into the lakes and soil and as we know they are fatal for creatures so that the old site should have liner too.
The second regulation is that because the companies now utilize recycled coal ash as other materials like concrete if new rules are held consumers insight that the coal ash is very dangerous; thus, they do not buy the products by the lecturer has the opposite view in contrast with the past experience of people about the mercury that they use the materials which produce from recycled mercury so for the coal ash they will adopt the rule.
The last conflict that the companies have is that new rules increase the price of electricity because it cost a lot for firms on the contrary the speaker asserts that it may cost for the company but it does not cost a lot for people and just the bill increase just in one percent as we see it is not a huge cost, virtually it is economical for society in order to protect their environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at the old site should have liner too. The second regulation is that because the c...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... the opposite view in contrast with the past experience of people about the mercury that they u...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the coal ash they will adapt the rule. The last conflict that the companies have i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, thus, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60294117647 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43030000854 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496323529412 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 21.2450331126 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.377880695 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 313.0 110.228320801 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 21.698381199 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 7.06452816374 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780314911014 0.272083759551 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459440648257 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333138193582 0.0662205650399 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459440648257 0.162205337803 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333138193582 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.3589403974 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 53.8541721854 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.0289183223 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.7273730684 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.498013245 278% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.2008830022 259% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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