Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading passage. You have 20 minutes to type your response.

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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading passage. You have 20 minutes to type your response.

Two view are described by some critics about zoos. some of them belive advantage while the rest of them don’t.

The one group assert that zoos are appropriate place to protect aminals, especially animals are getting extinct. they not only belive that zoos are notice the all of people about showed animals, but also infrom the public about preserve them our planet. also they say these places feed animals well.

The two group state that zoos are artifical and these place provide improper environment for animals. they emphasize that zoos are cruel for animals. Furthemore, zoos are dangerous places.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
...e described by some critics about zoos. some of them belive advantage while the rest...
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Suggestion: They
...especially animals are getting extinct. they not only belive that zoos are notice th...
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Suggestion: Also
... public about preserve them our planet. also they say these places feed animals well...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
... public about preserve them our planet. also they say these places feed animals well...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tifical and these place provide improper environment for animals. they emphasize ...
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Suggestion: They
...vide improper environment for animals. they emphasize that zoos are cruel for anima...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 30.3222958057 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 514.0 1373.03311258 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 99.0 270.72406181 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19191919192 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.15434214553 4.04702891845 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27364740072 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 145.348785872 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 419.366225166 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5694742722 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.25 110.228320801 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.375 21.698381199 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0256399860824 0.272083759551 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0127500869623 0.0996497079465 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172409446816 0.0662205650399 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0155957329296 0.162205337803 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119180684352 0.0443174109184 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.3589403974 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 63.6247240618 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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