Tidal Power_integrated task
The passage is describing the advantages of tidal energy which can be used to generate electricity. however, the lecturer argues the passage advantages and talks about the drawbacks of the process of tidal energy as process and usage.
Firstly, a passage describes the location of the barrage or dam on the opening of the river into the sea. where high tide water will enter into the dam and at the time low tide it will be released in the sea again. The force of the water produced in the process of discharge will be used to rotate the turbine and produce electrical energy. However, the lecturer critics that the location will affect some deleterious effects like change in the quality of water, addition of mud, debris, impacts on fish and birds.
Secondly, even though the passage describes the energy that it is renewable, nonpolluting, and with no greenhouse effects there will be a pernicious impact on the ecology of that area. Moreover, the level of the barrage will be more than the sea level hence a fish can not be migrating from the river to sea and fishermen will not able to travel back and forth from the sea, and the river. the lecturer describes this as the economy of the area will be affected,
Additionally, the lecturer said that tidal energy is not able to produce a sufficient amount of electrical energy that is required for daily needs. however, she posits that it may produce more on the regional level.
lecturer castigate the effect of the turbine force that it may paralyze the fish, shellfish, and many other marine creatures.
In totality even though according to the passage tidal energy is seems profitable it is nor that much conducive as the lecturer describes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ch can be used to generate electricity. however, the lecturer argues the passage advant...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
... the opening of the river into the sea. where high tide water will enter into the dam...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... and forth from the sea, and the river. the lecturer describes this as the economy ...
^^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...nergy that is required for daily needs. however, she posits that it may produce more on...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lecturer
...ay produce more on the regional level. lecturer castigate the effect of the turbine for...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'castigates'.
Suggestion: castigates
...e more on the regional level. lecturer castigate the effect of the turbine force that it...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79591836735 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52695222122 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465986394558 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1873379299 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.04879933057 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233726113384 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336773094608 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0369377333907 0.162205337803 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389712810912 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.