TPO-07 - Integrated Writing Task
The passage highlights that wood companies in United states will not go for ecocertification for several reasons. However, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and refuses every of the reason given in the reading. He does not think American wood companies would deny for eco certification.
First of all, the professor states that consumers do not read all advertisements and they always show their trustworthiness for the claims by independent consumer agencies. Consumers will react favorably if the companies choose to go for ecocertification. This refutes the passage claim that the American consumers would not consider the ecocertification before their purchase.
Secondly, the professor contends that everyone prefer to go for things which are lower in price. Additionally, a study in the united states shows that customers does not rely on price alone. If the product price which they want to purchase is not much higher than another product, they will purchase the product they want. The consumers also consider five percent of the factors other than price and not always go for value protecting environment.
Finally, the professor claims that the companies will get the certification not because they want to sell product in foreign market but bacause of foriegn competition. American companies will show less progress if other companies crowding the American market. This is not in agreement with the passage that the companies will not go for certification as they don not want to sell their products internationally.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34959349593 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0535464104 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50406504065 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9182317612 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435595882033 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159930980105 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851076865264 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266127882354 0.162205337803 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066644911471 0.0443174109184 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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