TPO 18 integrated writting
Torreya Taxifoha is a very popular tree in the 1950s in Florida, but now it's population started to decline and chances to become extinct. Both the lecturer and reading talks about the different methods are used to protect this tree. The former was not convinced about the method used to protect the trees while the lateral emphasizes the different approaches taken to save the trees.
The first point of the discussion revolves around reestablish the Torreya trees. The instructor says that this method is not successful. A microclimate is widely affected by climate change and also due to the global warming temperature increased and the area became dry. So either way, we can not maintain microclimate which is best for the growth of Torreya trees. However, the article claims that reestablish these trees in the same location is beneficial.
Moreover, another topic of debate is the relocation of these trees. Once again the instructor was not agreed about the migration of the trees. He mentions that when one of the trees called Black Lotus was migrated to the north, it spread out very quickly which affected many local plants and trees and they damaged the local areas. He says that relocation can create unpredictable outcomes. On the other hand, the text mentions that relocation is the best method to save the Torreya trees.
Last but not list, we reach the final argument about Torreya trees should preserve in the research center. The professor says that the research center does not have the capacity for a larger and genetic diverse climate, so this is not the best to survive trees for a longer time. Nevertheless, the passage highlight that Torreya trees should be preserved in the research center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s around reestablish the Torreya trees. The instructor says that this method is not...
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ebate is the relocation of these trees. Once again the instructor was not agreed abo...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02787456446 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51936857303 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2785840908 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06452816374 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294177037296 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957354468435 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781836445307 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177319058225 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471171232083 0.0443174109184 106% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.