tpo 40
Since the dawn of the civilization, human being waere migtaring, either by their choice or by the force of the circumstance. They usually faced several limitation on this long way of migration; they should to abandon their assets and freinds. So hard is to make a long lasting friendship that make it hard to choose to stay or leave. When it comes to this point, some controversies arise that weather it is not a good idea to move a new country or new city because of lost of old friends. Personally, I disagree with the statement. In following lines I will present and investigate two reasons to substantiate my response.
The first reason is that life is an advanture chance that only is given to a person once. living in one place for whole life, convert people's life to a boring life and rarely can it provide an excitement for them. But living in various places is more like and adventure; people can experience many new things and never do they life get boring. Also, they can make new friends and learn a lot from them, but in camparison people who live all of their life on a place, usually get depressed and in many cases associating with friends also can not help them. For instance, I myself studied my bachelor degree in a university far from my home town. Firts, I was very upset, but as the time went on, I found new friends and experienced many worthwile things. If I did not accept to withstand the first hardship of sepration from my friends, I would not be able to exprience such a good life.
The second reason is that people can have a more wide community around them. With all the new technologies in this modern world, migration does not mean isolation. People can connect their friends easily by phone and video calls, and can share their experiences. They can invite their old friends, and they can have a larger community if they let their new and old friends become friends with each other.In comparison, People who do not migrate during their life, always have a limited number of friends around them. In the same example, since I had started my study in a new city, I have had more friends compared with my home town friends.
In summary, having analyzed the preceding arguments and reasons, one can soon surmise that moving to a new city does not mean losing old friends. This is because not only can people do some adventures but also they may have a larger community of friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, in summary, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 22.412803532 228% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1373.03311258 145% => OK
No of words: 434.0 270.72406181 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57373271889 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48848886327 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 145.348785872 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 419.366225166 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6894681519 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091122513082 0.272083759551 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032293685408 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215588043593 0.0662205650399 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601398734115 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00443199463758 0.0443174109184 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.2367328918 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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